Insights from our editors on establishing and maintaining viewpoint and handling point of view in novels and short stories.

FLASHING THE READER: A Practical Guide to Clearly Managing Transitions of Time, Place, and Viewpoint in Fiction

[by John Robert Marlow]

TRICKY TRANSITIONS

Few works of fiction relate events in a continuous flow, from start to finish. Sometimes the story moves back in time (as with flashbacks); more often it jumps forward, sparing the reader the dull details of ordinary life. Frequently, the transition will take the reader from one location (and set of characters) […]

By |2024-01-13T19:00:05+00:00|The Writer’s Craft|Comments Off on FLASHING THE READER: A Practical Guide to Clearly Managing Transitions of Time, Place, and Viewpoint in Fiction

POV Part III: Mastering Third-Person Point of View A Fiction Writer’s Guide to Third-Person Perspective, from Omniscient to Objective

In Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft, Janet Burroway describes point of view (POV) as “the most complex element of fiction.” She’s right. Choosing and managing POV requires constant attention to the delicate relationship between reader, author, and character. And maintaining consistency can challenge even seasoned writers.

By |2025-08-04T19:39:38+00:00|The Writer’s Craft|Comments Off on POV Part III: Mastering Third-Person Point of View A Fiction Writer’s Guide to Third-Person Perspective, from Omniscient to Objective

POV Part II: Writing With the Camera in Mind
Using Visual Metaphors to Control Narrative Distance and Voice

Writers often speak in metaphors, especially when discussing our craft. We sculpt stories like clay, carve them like wood, and paint pictures with prose. We talk about composing musical dialogue. The phrase “honing your craft” is so common in writing workshops—and other creative fields—that most people forget “hone” originally referred to a whetstone, a literal […]

By |2025-08-04T19:33:08+00:00|The Writer’s Craft|Comments Off on POV Part II: Writing With the Camera in Mind
Using Visual Metaphors to Control Narrative Distance and Voice

POV Part I: POV Mistakes That Sabotage Your Story How to Spot and Fix Head-Hopping Before Your Reader Notices

Understanding Headhopping—and Why It Undermines Your Story

To the untrained ear, the term head-hopping might sound like something related to home-brewed beer. But in the world of professional fiction editing, head-hopping refers to a common mistake made by writers who haven’t fully grasped the conventions of point of view (POV).

In […]

By |2025-08-04T19:35:32+00:00|The Editor’s Craft and Process, The Writer’s Craft|Comments Off on POV Part I: POV Mistakes That Sabotage Your Story How to Spot and Fix Head-Hopping Before Your Reader Notices
Go to Top