"I had several "ah ha!" moments when Renni Browne or Shannon Roberts pinpointed weak areas in the plot - and offered solutions. Both editors had ideas about how to add depth to main characters and spice up the conflict. Renni suggested I expand a key idea and bring it into the first chapter, which has increased the stakes and made the main characters worthy of a reader's interest and concern. The annotation was incredibly thorough - a full critique plus many specific notes in the body of the manuscript. Something stopped my novel from being riveting. Renni zeroed in with her laser insight to illuminate the murky areas and shine a light on the right path. Thank you! I am working on the revisions with fresh energy. It seems at last that I am getting it right. I am very grateful."

S.E. Floyd

Temple Terrace, FL