First Sentence: “‘Have
you reached a verdict?’ Judge Alfred Neff asked the eight men and four women
seated in the jury box.”
This legal thriller starts out in the most appropriate (and
cliché?) setting for its genre: the courtroom. The omniscient narrator
introduces Betsy Tannenbaum, Andrea Hammermill’s defense attorney, in the
murder of her client’s husband. It is quickly explained at the top of page 4
that Andrea did indeed pull the trigger (until there were no more bullets), but
her pitiful sobbing makes it doubtful that this matronly woman is guilty of
anything. And this is what the jury supports in their verdict.
Chapter one ends with Betsy choked up on the fringe of a
celebratory crowd—I should note that I find it unlikely that a lawyer should
cry over winning a case, unless she is a relative newcomer to the profession.
But then why would a newcomer be assigned a murder case? I’m irritated by women
being superfluously emotional in literature—it only highlights the author’s
male sexuality.
Section two of chapter one throws the reader into the climax
of a sex scene between a sleek, wolf-like Darius and some anonymous blonde.
They are in a hotel room at 2PM—what are they hiding from? After his shower,
Darius incongruously breaks off their questionable relationship to the blonde’s
disappointment and surprise.
When she questions him, he replies, “‘To your credit, you
are beautiful and good in bed,’ he said, knotting his tie, ‘but you’re
boring.’” The blonde’s insulted and threatens to tell his wife—aha!—and he
counters by twisting her arm, threatening her against ever contacting him or
his wife again. Darius is obviously a bad guy, nearly a sociopath in his lack
of empathy. He toys with the idea of seducing her again, then leaves for a
meeting in his black Ferrari before the page break on page 8, “without the
slightest suspicion that someone was photographing him from the corner of the
motel parking lot.”
Page 9 gives us Darius’ first name, Martin, and has him
racing towards downtown Portland.
He admires the skyline, from which he made his fortune. The radio is
broadcasting an interview with Betsy regarding her recent acquittal, a
convenient exposition of her past: this is her second recent acquittal in a
murder case using the battered woman defense, she is one of America’s
up-and-coming female trial lawyers, she’s generally humble, and has a daughter.
Darius’ car phone rings and there’s a voice on the other
line he doesn’t recognize, who tells Darius to meet him at Captain Ned’s
seafood restaurant before hanging up.
Darius is obviously flustered and pulls to the side of the
road where he regains his composure: “In a way he was grateful to the caller.
He had grown complacent after all these years, but you were never safe. He
would consider this a wake-up call” (11).
Section three opens in Captain Ned’s, which is dark but
seems relatively busy for this time of day. A heavy-set man joins Darius in his
booth, wasting no time in expressing his blackmail scheme. The stranger has
drawn a connection between Darius and some notes and black roses left around
Hunter’s Point and recently Portland.
The stranger mentions his own time in prison and “other rape-os” like Darius.
Darius feigns acceptance of the deal--$250,000 to keep quiet—and the man
leaves, ending the section on page 14.
Section four introduces another character, Russ Miller,
speeding home to his wife through the Oregon
rain. He’s excited to tell her about receiving the Darius Construction account
at his advertising firm after schmoozing with Darius at various house parties.
Russ continues to fantasize about his career options until he arrives home to
find dinner only half-cooked, and his wife missing. After changing into house
clothes, he goes into the bedroom to find a black rose, and a note that reads
“Gone, but not forgotten.” Chapter one ends with this on page 16.
Chapter two introduces Austin Forbes, President of the United States,
meeting with Senator Colby and Kelly Bendelow, his “troubleshooter.” After a
string of questions about Senator Ray Colby’s marriage, personal life, and
history, the President makes his nomination known for Senator Colby as Chief
Justice.
After the page break on page 19, Colby heads to the liquor
cabinet of his home, leaving his wife to sleep. He muses on his admiration for
his father, despite his own successes: “first at Harvard Law, CEO of Marlin
Steel, the governor of New York and a United States
senator.” It’s partly nerves that’s keeping Colby from sleep—he is to be nominated
tomorrow—but also the presence of “something” in his past. This is kept vague
when the chapter ends on page 21 with Colby returning to bed.
Chapter three begins with the introduction of yet another
character: district attorney Alan Page. He is recovering from a recent divorce
from his wife due to her numerous affairs and lies, which has left him bitter
and love-sick. Alan enters his office where his secretary tells him Chief of
Police Tobias called, sounding upset.
Alan returns Chief Tobias’ call, who states, “We’ve got
another one.” Chief Tobias describes the missing woman, Victoria Miller, Russ’
wife. She’s “just like the others,” having disappeared without a struggle, and
the presence of the note and rose. She is the third woman to disappear, the culprit
leaving no evidence, and there is no obvious connection between the three women aside
from their one-per-month disappearance.
Section two opens on the bottom of page 25, back to Betsy
Tannenbaum. She is “frazzled” and about to leave the office to pick up her
daughter Kathy from daycare and to cook dinner. She seems to be a single working
mother. Her last call of the day is from Darius, who offers her $2,500 to meet
in her office at six so no one else in the office will know. She calls her
ex-husband Rick, who irritatingly obliges to pick up Kathy from daycare.
After the break on page 28, Darius finally arrives 35
minutes late. He questions her about a book by Greig, a serial killer. He asks
Betsy if she would represent such a monster, which she would agree to do on
principle. He then presents her with a check, matching her previous year’s
gross income, saying she is entitled to more if she agrees to represent him in
the future. She is offended at this breech of privacy, and unsure about whether
to accept a case in this way, but ultimately agrees.
Betsy arrives home at the beginning of section three,
ecstatic and flattered to be chosen by Martin Darius. After greeting her
six-year-old, Rick and Betsy argue about picking up Kathy. She starts to
prepare dinner, letting it slip that Darius retained her that evening. Rick is
incredulous and jealous.
After a page break on page 35, Betsy tucks Kathy into bed.
As she washes the dinner plates, she muses on her two-month-old divorce and
Rick’s jealousy over her career success. He is a lawyer too, and was passed
over for partnership last year. Betsy still feels heartbroken and lonely.
Chapter four introduces yet another character: Wayne Turner,
Senator Colby’s administrative assistant. He is hurting from drinking too much
the night before, celebrating Colby’s nomination for Chief Justice. His last
message of the morning is from Nancy Gordon, calling from Hunter’s Point, NY.
Turner calls Gordon back, who immediately says: “He’s
surfaced.” The characters in this book waste no time in greetings. Turner
thinks a moment, then feels sick. The two characters seem to have a close,
professional relationship, but it’s unclear what Nancy does or why she’s privy to the
investigation—cop or detective?
Turner wonders if there’s a connection to the resurfacing of the serial killers
and Senator Colby’s nomination, though what connection there might be between
the two men is unknown to the reader. After some more weighted vagaries, Nancy implies that she’ll
kill the man responsible, despite her title of Homicide Detective (tada!). The
section ends on page 42.
Section two returns to Alan Page, district attorney and
confidante of Chief Tobias. He’s at home, eating a TV dinner—it seems that he’s
back to living the bare-bones bachelor life. He’s watching a news report on
Senator Colby’s nomination—the ubiquitous story—when Nancy Gordon knocks on the
door, asking for a moment.
Wasting no time, she asks if the phrase “Gone, But Not
Forgotten” means anything to Page. He’s shocked because this information isn’t
on public record. Gorgon, described as attractive without trying, is hell-bent
on this case, stating that she hasn’t slept well since it started more than 10
years ago. She thinks Gone, But Not Forgotten is worse than Bundy, Manson, and
Dahmer because he’s cunning and still at large. She hastens to tell Page all
about Hunter’s Point, which is the segue to Part Two, Chapter Five, page 49.
Gone, But Not Forgotten
is a classic example of bestselling detective fiction. The characters are
tortured, driven, attractive people tied together by an archetypal sadistic
villain. The writing is terse, the dialogue is clipped and witty, and the
pacing is relentless. However, all of these traits come together to make Gone unremarkable as a work of lasting fiction—while
not entirely predictable, these are stock characters in a stock plot. Gone is a quick read, for better or for worse.
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