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| Little Brother, by Cory Doctorow |
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by Kristi Jenkins Little Brother is Cory Doctorow's first novel specifically targeted at young adults, but that should in no way limit its audience. The story is the first person narrative of Marcus Yallow, a high school senior in San Francisco and "one of the most surveilled people in the world". As the story begins, a simple afternoon of ditching school to play a game goes horribly awry, and Marcus and his friends find themselves in the custody of the Department of Homeland Security. Through the teens' experiences, the reader is presented with issues of surveillance and civil liberties, and the characters voice an interesting libertarian perspective without being heavy-handed. There are three chapters in the first 50 pages, and each is an effective combination of exposition and action.
The first chapter introduces Marcus Yallow and gives a quick overview of the various surveillance and tracking systems in place at his high school. Yallow is written as a street smart nerd with a knack for getting around out-of-touch adults and their attempts to manage teens. We meet Yallow's fellow nerd friends and learn about their favorite Alternate Reality Game (ARG), Harajuku Fun Madness. Harajuku is a mix of online and real-world gameplay in which players use GPS to track down local clues related to the game. A major puzzle has just been posted to Harajuku, and Marcus and his friends make plans to ditch school and hunt down the clue.
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